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Writing Assignment
Social Media Age Restrictions
Standard: Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence, including introducing claims, acknowledging and distinguishing from counterclaims, supporting with logical reasoning and relevant evidence, and maintaining a formal style.
What to Do
Assignment OverviewIn this assignment, you will analyze the debate over social media age restrictions and write a 4-paragraph argumentative essay. Your essay must include a counterclaim paragraph where you address the opposing view and explain why your position is stronger. The Social Media Age DebateThe Push for Restrictions
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In recent years, concerns about young people and social media have reached a tipping point. Research cited by the U.S. Surgeon General shows a troubling pattern. Teens who spend more than three hours a day on social media face double the risk of depression and anxiety. Cyberbullying, unrealistic body image standards, and addictive design features like infinite scrolling have all been linked to declining mental health among adolescents.
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These findings have pushed several countries to act. Australia passed a law banning social media for children under 16, and similar legislation has been proposed in the United States and the European Union. Supporters argue that the adolescent brain is still developing. That is especially true of the prefrontal cortex, which handles decision-making and impulse control. In their view, younger teens are especially vulnerable to the manipulative algorithms that keep users engaged. What Teens Could Lose
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However, critics of age restrictions argue that social media also provides real benefits for young people. It allows teens to connect with friends, explore their identities, find communities of support, and access educational content. For LGBTQ+ youth and teens in rural areas, social media can be a lifeline. Sometimes it is the only way to connect with people who understand their experiences. Banning access until 16 could isolate the very young people who need these connections most. Enforcement and Alternatives
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There is also the practical concern of enforcement. Age verification online is notoriously difficult. Determined teenagers will likely find ways around any restrictions. Some experts suggest a different path: instead of bans, schools and parents should focus on teaching digital literacy. That means helping young people build the skills to navigate social media safely. Others would require platforms to disable addictive features for younger users rather than ban them entirely.
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The debate reveals a tension between protection and autonomy. At what point should society step in to protect young people? And when should it trust them to make their own choices? Vocabulary Bank
Writing Steps
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Analyze the Issue (Pre-Writing)
Analyze the passage and the issue:
- What is the central question or debate? - What are the strongest arguments on each side? - Which side do you find most convincing, and why? You can use bullet points, notes, or sentences — whatever helps you organize your thinking. Social media platforms like Instagram, TikTok, and Snapchat currently require users to be at least 13 years old. However, many lawmakers and researchers are pushing to raise the minimum age to 16. As someone who has grown up with social media, you have a unique perspective on this debate. What do you think — should the age limit be raised?
Before you write your argument, analyze the issue carefully. Note: This step helps you think. It will not be part of your final essay.
Scoring Guidance — Step 1
Look for:
Main Idea Detail / Evidence 1 Detail / Evidence 2 Detail / Evidence 3
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Paragraph 1: Introduction
Write your introduction paragraph (3-6 sentences):
- Open with context that shows why this issue matters - State your claim clearly and precisely - Preview your main reason(s) - Signal that you will address opposing views Write your introduction paragraph.
A strong Grade 8 introduction: - Provides context for the issue (why it matters) - States a clear, precise claim (your position) - Previews your main reason(s) and acknowledges that opposing views exist
Scoring Guidance — Step 2
Role: introduction
Target: ~70 words
Look for:
Why does this issue matter right now?
What is your precise position?
What main reason supports your position?
Try: 'While some argue [opposing view], [state your claim] because [reason].
Sentence Starters
Many people wonder whether ___.
The question of ___ is an important one.
In this essay, I will argue that ___.
Target: about 70 words
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Paragraph 2: Evidence and Analysis
Write your body paragraph (5-8 sentences):
- State your strongest reason(s) - Provide specific evidence from the passage (quote or paraphrase) - Analyze the evidence: explain HOW and WHY it supports your claim - Use transitions to connect your reasoning (for example, because, consequently, this demonstrates) Write your body paragraph — the core of your argument.
A strong body paragraph at Grade 8 includes: 1. Reason(s) — logical arguments supporting your claim 2. Evidence — specific quotes or details from the passage 3. Analysis — explain WHY the evidence proves your point (don't just cite it)
Scoring Guidance — Step 3
Role: body paragraph
Target: ~130 words
Look for:
What is your strongest reason?
What specific evidence from the passage supports it?
HOW does this evidence prove your point? (Don't just cite it — explain it)
Try: 'This evidence demonstrates that... because...
Sentence Starters
One reason ___ is that ___. For example, ___.
A second reason is ___, which shows that ___.
Target: about 130 words
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Paragraph 3: Counterclaim and Rebuttal
Write your counterclaim paragraph (3-6 sentences):
- Acknowledge the strongest opposing argument fairly - Explain why that argument is flawed or why your position is still stronger - Use evidence or reasoning to support your rebuttal Use transitions like: however, on the other hand, while some argue, despite this, nevertheless. Write your counterclaim paragraph. This is what sets strong arguments apart from weak ones.
A counterclaim paragraph: 1. Acknowledges the opposing view fairly (don't misrepresent it) 2. Rebuts it with evidence or reasoning (explains why your position is still stronger)
Scoring Guidance — Step 4
Role: body paragraph
Target: ~80 words
Look for:
What is the best argument AGAINST your position?
Why is that argument wrong or incomplete?
What evidence shows your position is stronger?
Try: 'While some may argue that..., this view overlooks the fact that...
Sentence Starters
One reason ___ is that ___. For example, ___.
A second reason is ___, which shows that ___.
Target: about 80 words
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Paragraph 4: Conclusion
Write your conclusion paragraph (3-5 sentences):
- Restate your claim in a new way (don't just copy your introduction) - Emphasize why your argument matters - End with a call to action or a thought-provoking final statement Write your conclusion paragraph to wrap up your argument.
A strong conclusion at Grade 8: - Restates your claim (in a fresh, evolved way) - Summarizes the significance of your argument - Ends with a call to action or forward-looking statement
Scoring Guidance — Step 5
Role: conclusion
Target: ~60 words
Look for:
How has your claim evolved through your argument?
Why should readers care about this issue?
What should happen next? What action should be taken?
Sentence Starters
For these reasons, ___.
In conclusion, ___ because ___.
The evidence clearly shows that ___.
Target: about 60 words
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Revise and Refine
Review your 4-paragraph essay and revise for:
- Coherence: Does each paragraph connect logically to the next? - Analysis: Are your evidence-to-claim connections clear? - Counterclaim: Did you fairly present and effectively rebut the opposing view? - Style: Is your tone formal and appropriate? - Conventions: Fix any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation. You've written all four paragraphs of your argumentative essay!
Now revise and refine your essay for maximum impact. Your essay includes: - Paragraph 1 (Introduction): Context, claim, and preview - Paragraph 2 (Body): Reasons, evidence, and analysis - Paragraph 3 (Counterclaim): Opposing view and rebuttal - Paragraph 4 (Conclusion): Restated claim, significance, and call to action Revision goals: - Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs - Strengthen the evidence-to-claim connections - Maintain formal style throughout - Verify the counterclaim paragraph fairly represents the opposing view - Fix any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors
Scoring Guidance — Step 6
Target: ~350 words
Look for:
Do your paragraphs flow logically from one to the next?
Is your analysis clear — does the reader know WHY your evidence matters?
Did you fairly represent the opposing view before rebutting it?
Use transitions: furthermore, consequently, nevertheless, in conclusion
Sentence Starters
In my opinion, ___.
One reason is ___. For example, ___.
This shows that ___ because ___.
Some people think ___; however, ___.
Target: about 350 words
Self-Check Rubric
Before You Turn InI completed the planning step
I wrote my introduction
My introduction is about 70 words
I wrote my body paragraph
My body paragraph is about 130 words
I wrote my body paragraph
My body paragraph is about 80 words
I wrote my conclusion
My conclusion is about 60 words
I completed Step 6: Revise and Refine
My revise and refine is about 350 words
I re-read my writing and fixed any spelling or grammar mistakes
I am proud of this work
ReflectionWhat was the hardest part of this assignment? What would you do differently next time?
For the Teacher
Teacher Guide — Social Media Age RestrictionsW.8.1 — Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence, including introducing claims, acknowledging and distinguishing from counterclaims, supporting with logical reasoning and relevant evidence, and maintaining a formal style. · Grade 8 · ~50 min
Scoring Rubric
Step-by-Step Coaching Notes
Step 1 — Analyze the Issue (Pre-Writing)
Step 2 — Paragraph 1: Introduction
Step 3 — Paragraph 2: Evidence and Analysis
Step 4 — Paragraph 3: Counterclaim and Rebuttal
Step 5 — Paragraph 4: Conclusion
Step 6 — Revise and Refine
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