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Science CER
Natural Materials and Water Filtration
What to Do
Investigation QuestionWhich natural material is most effective at filtering sediment and impurities from dirty water? Background InformationIn nature, water is filtered as it passes through layers of soil, sand, and rock Water Turbidity After Filtration Through Natural Materials
Starting turbidity: 150 NTU. Same volume (500 mL) poured through each column. Average of 3 trials.
Key Vocabulary
Writing Steps
1
Examine the Evidence
Answer these questions to show you understand the data:
1. What is the investigation question asking you to explain? 2. What is the independent variable? The dependent variable? 3. What trend or pattern do you see in the data? (Be specific — use numbers.) 4. What do you think the data is showing? (Your prediction before writing.) Bullet points or short sentences are fine. Before writing, carefully read the investigation question and analyze the data.
Scientists read data critically before forming explanations. Look for: - Patterns and trends in the numbers - Which variables were controlled and which were tested - What the data shows and what it doesn't show Note: This step prepares you to write. It is not part of your final score.
Scoring Guidance — Step 1
Look for:
Claim Evidence Reasoning
2
Write Your Claim
Write one precise sentence that answers: Which natural material is most effective at filtering sediment and impurities from dirty water?
Make sure your claim: - States a specific relationship between two variables - Uses precise scientific language - Could be tested or proven wrong with data A claim is one precise sentence that directly answers the investigation question.
Investigation Question: Which natural material is most effective at filtering sediment and impurities from dirty water? At this grade level, a strong claim: - Answers the question in ONE sentence - Is precise and measurable (not vague) - Names the direction of effect (more/less/faster/slower) - Is falsifiable — it could be proven wrong with different data Strong claim: "As [independent variable] increases, [dependent variable] also increases." Weak claim: "The experiment showed that [topic] has an effect."
Scoring Guidance — Step 2
Role: claim
Target: ~20 words
Look for:
Name both variables: what was changed AND what was measured
State the direction: as X increases, Y increases/decreases
Avoid vague language: 'affected it' → name the specific effect
Sentence Starters
My claim is that ___ affects ___.
Based on the data, ___.
The investigation shows that ___.
Target: about 20 words
3
Cite Your Evidence
Write 2-3 sentences of evidence from the data table.
Your evidence should: - Include specific numbers with units from the data table - Show a comparison (highest vs. lowest, before vs. after) - Come from the investigation data, not background knowledge Check: Can you find your numbers in the data table? If yes, it's evidence. If not, it might be background knowledge. Evidence is specific data from the investigation that supports your claim.
At this grade level, strong evidence: - Includes 2 or more specific data points with numbers - Comes from YOUR investigation data (not background knowledge) - Distinguishes between primary data and background context - Is directly relevant to your claim Primary data: Numbers or measurements from your data table. Background knowledge: General science facts you already knew. "The plant grew taller" is observation. "The plant in direct sunlight grew 22cm in two weeks" is evidence.
Scoring Guidance — Step 3
Role: evidence
Target: ~40 words
Look for:
Data Reference (Turbidity After Filtration (NTU))
Activated charcoal: 8Fine sand: 22Cotton fiber: 35Gravel: 98Clay pellets: 61Unfiltered (control): 150
Use at least 2 specific numbers from the data table
Compare values: '...compared to...' or 'while...' or 'In contrast...
Include units (cm, °C, mg/L, etc.)
Don't cite background facts here — save those for reasoning
Sentence Starters
The data table shows that when ___, ___.
Specifically, the measurement of ___ was ___.
Two data points that support my claim are ___ and ___.
Target: about 40 words
4
Write Your Reasoning
Write 3-4 sentences explaining WHY your evidence supports your claim.
Your reasoning MUST include: - A named scientific principle (e.g., photosynthesis, Newton's third law, natural selection) - The MECHANISM: HOW or WHY does this concept explain your result? - Language like "This demonstrates..." or "According to [principle]..." The test: if you removed the evidence numbers, your reasoning should still explain the science. Reasoning is the scientific explanation that connects your evidence to your claim — the "because" that explains WHY the data shows what it shows. It is NOT a repeat of your evidence or "this proves my claim is correct."
Weak: "This proves that plants need more light to grow." Strong: "This demonstrates photosynthesis: with more light, the plant produces more glucose, which directly increases growth rate."
Scoring Guidance — Step 4
Role: reasoning
Target: ~40 words
Look for:
Name the scientific principle: '...demonstrates [concept]...
Explain the mechanism: not just WHAT but HOW or WHY
Try: 'According to [principle], [mechanism explanation]. This means that...
Check: Did you actually explain the science? Or just restate the data?
Sentence Starters
This supports my claim because the principle of ___ explains ___.
The scientific mechanism behind this is ___.
Therefore, when ___, ___ because ___.
Target: about 40 words
5
Write Your Complete CER Paragraph
Write your complete CER paragraph (5-8 sentences).
Use your claim, evidence, and reasoning from the previous steps. Improve them as you write — make your paragraph clear, precise, and well-connected. Checklist before submitting: - [ ] Claim: one precise sentence answering the investigation question - [ ] Evidence: 2+ specific data points with numbers - [ ] Reasoning: named scientific principle + mechanism explanation - [ ] Flow: transitions connect the three parts Now assemble everything into one polished paragraph.
Your scaffold boxes show what you've written. Use those as your starting point — improve and connect them into flowing prose with transitions like "Furthermore," "This demonstrates," "According to..."
Scoring Guidance — Step 5
Role: complete CER paragraph
Target: ~100 words
Look for:
Data Reference (Turbidity After Filtration (NTU))
Activated charcoal: 8Fine sand: 22Cotton fiber: 35Gravel: 98Clay pellets: 61Unfiltered (control): 150
Start with your claim sentence
Add your evidence: 'For example, the data shows that...
Transition to reasoning: 'This demonstrates [principle]...
End by connecting the reasoning back to your claim
Claim
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Evidence
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Reasoning
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Complete Paragraph
Sentence Starters
My claim is ___. The evidence is ___. This supports my claim because ___.
Based on the data, ___, which shows ___. This makes sense because ___.
Target: about 100 words
Self-Check Rubric
Before You Turn InI completed the planning step
I wrote my claim
My claim is about 20 words
I wrote my evidence
My evidence is about 40 words
I wrote my reasoning
My reasoning is about 40 words
I wrote my complete CER paragraph
My complete CER paragraph is about 100 words
I re-read my writing and fixed any spelling or grammar mistakes
I am proud of this work
ReflectionWhat was the hardest part of this assignment? What would you do differently next time?
For the Teacher
Teacher Guide — Natural Materials and Water FiltrationNGSS SEP4, SEP6, SEP7; CCSS.WHST.6-8.1, WHST.6-8.2 · Grade 7
Scoring Rubric
Step-by-Step Coaching Notes
Step 1 — Examine the Evidence
Step 2 — Write Your Claim
Step 3 — Cite Your Evidence
Step 4 — Write Your Reasoning
Step 5 — Write Your Complete CER Paragraph
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