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Science CER
Natural Materials and Water Filtration
Grade 7 NGSS SEP4, SEP6, SEP7; CCSS.WHST.6-8.1, WHST.6-8.2 5 steps

What to Do

  1. Read the Investigation Question carefully.
  2. Study the Background Information and Data Table.
  3. Review the Key Vocabulary — use these words in your writing.
  4. Complete each writing step. Use evidence from the data to support your answer.
  5. Use the checklist at the end to review your work.

Investigation Question

Which natural material is most effective at filtering sediment and impurities from dirty water?

Background Information

In nature, water is filtered as it passes through layers of soil, sand, and rock
on its way to underground aquifers. This natural filtration removes sediment,
some bacteria, and dissolved substances, which is why groundwater is often cleaner
than surface water.

Different materials filter water differently. Some trap large particles on the
surface, while others attract and hold dissolved impurities. Scientists measure
water clarity using turbidity — a measurement in Nephelometric Turbidity Units
(NTU). Lower NTU means clearer water.

In this investigation, students poured the same muddy water (150 NTU) through
columns packed with different natural materials and measured the turbidity of the
water that came out the bottom.

Water Turbidity After Filtration Through Natural Materials

Filter MaterialTurbidity After Filtration (NTU)Percent Reduction
Activated charcoal895%
Fine sand2285%
Cotton fiber3577%
Gravel9835%
Clay pellets6159%
Unfiltered (control)1500%
Starting turbidity: 150 NTU. Same volume (500 mL) poured through each column. Average of 3 trials.
Key Vocabulary
WordDefinition
turbidity A measure of how cloudy or murky water is — higher turbidity means more particles are suspended in the water
filtration The process of passing a liquid through a material that traps particles and impurities, producing cleaner water
aquifer An underground layer of rock or sediment that holds groundwater — natural filtration cleans water before it reaches aquifers
sediment Tiny particles of soil, sand, or organic matter suspended in water that make it cloudy
adsorption The process by which particles stick to the surface of a material — activated charcoal has a huge surface area for adsorption
Writing Steps
1 Examine the Evidence
Answer these questions to show you understand the data:

1. What is the investigation question asking you to explain?
2. What is the independent variable? The dependent variable?
3. What trend or pattern do you see in the data? (Be specific — use numbers.)
4. What do you think the data is showing? (Your prediction before writing.)

Bullet points or short sentences are fine.
Before writing, carefully read the investigation question and analyze the data.

Scientists read data critically before forming explanations. Look for:
- Patterns and trends in the numbers
- Which variables were controlled and which were tested
- What the data shows and what it doesn't show

Note: This step prepares you to write. It is not part of your final score.
Scoring Guidance — Step 1
Look for:
  • Independent variable = what was changed. Dependent variable = what was measured.
  • Look for a pattern: as X increases, does Y increase or decrease?
  • Note specific values: the highest, the lowest, the difference
Claim
Evidence
Reasoning
2 Write Your Claim
Write one precise sentence that answers: Which natural material is most effective at filtering sediment and impurities from dirty water?

Make sure your claim:
- States a specific relationship between two variables
- Uses precise scientific language
- Could be tested or proven wrong with data
A claim is one precise sentence that directly answers the investigation question.

Investigation Question: Which natural material is most effective at filtering sediment and impurities from dirty water?

At this grade level, a strong claim:
- Answers the question in ONE sentence
- Is precise and measurable (not vague)
- Names the direction of effect (more/less/faster/slower)
- Is falsifiable — it could be proven wrong with different data

Strong claim: "As [independent variable] increases, [dependent variable] also increases."
Weak claim: "The experiment showed that [topic] has an effect."
Scoring Guidance — Step 2
Role: claim
Target: ~20 words
Look for:
  • Name both variables: what was changed AND what was measured
  • State the direction: as X increases, Y increases/decreases
  • Avoid vague language: 'affected it' → name the specific effect
Name both variables: what was changed AND what was measured
State the direction: as X increases, Y increases/decreases
Avoid vague language: 'affected it' → name the specific effect
Sentence Starters
My claim is that ___ affects ___.
Based on the data, ___.
The investigation shows that ___.
Target: about 20 words
3 Cite Your Evidence
Write 2-3 sentences of evidence from the data table.

Your evidence should:
- Include specific numbers with units from the data table
- Show a comparison (highest vs. lowest, before vs. after)
- Come from the investigation data, not background knowledge

Check: Can you find your numbers in the data table? If yes, it's evidence. If not, it might be background knowledge.
Evidence is specific data from the investigation that supports your claim.

At this grade level, strong evidence:
- Includes 2 or more specific data points with numbers
- Comes from YOUR investigation data (not background knowledge)
- Distinguishes between primary data and background context
- Is directly relevant to your claim

Primary data: Numbers or measurements from your data table.
Background knowledge: General science facts you already knew.

"The plant grew taller" is observation. "The plant in direct sunlight grew 22cm in two weeks" is evidence.
Scoring Guidance — Step 3
Role: evidence
Target: ~40 words
Look for:
  • Use at least 2 specific numbers from the data table
  • Compare values: '...compared to...' or 'while...' or 'In contrast...'
  • Include units (cm, °C, mg/L, etc.)
  • Don't cite background facts here — save those for reasoning
Data Reference (Turbidity After Filtration (NTU)) Activated charcoal: 8Fine sand: 22Cotton fiber: 35Gravel: 98Clay pellets: 61Unfiltered (control): 150
Use at least 2 specific numbers from the data table
Compare values: '...compared to...' or 'while...' or 'In contrast...
Include units (cm, °C, mg/L, etc.)
Don't cite background facts here — save those for reasoning
Sentence Starters
The data table shows that when ___, ___.
Specifically, the measurement of ___ was ___.
Two data points that support my claim are ___ and ___.
Target: about 40 words
4 Write Your Reasoning
Write 3-4 sentences explaining WHY your evidence supports your claim.

Your reasoning MUST include:
- A named scientific principle (e.g., photosynthesis, Newton's third law, natural selection)
- The MECHANISM: HOW or WHY does this concept explain your result?
- Language like "This demonstrates..." or "According to [principle]..."

The test: if you removed the evidence numbers, your reasoning should still explain the science.
Reasoning is the scientific explanation that connects your evidence to your claim — the "because" that explains WHY the data shows what it shows. It is NOT a repeat of your evidence or "this proves my claim is correct."

Weak: "This proves that plants need more light to grow."
Strong: "This demonstrates photosynthesis: with more light, the plant produces more glucose, which directly increases growth rate."
Scoring Guidance — Step 4
Role: reasoning
Target: ~40 words
Look for:
  • Name the scientific principle: '...demonstrates [concept]...'
  • Explain the mechanism: not just WHAT but HOW or WHY
  • Try: 'According to [principle], [mechanism explanation]. This means that...'
  • Check: Did you actually explain the science? Or just restate the data?
Name the scientific principle: '...demonstrates [concept]...
Explain the mechanism: not just WHAT but HOW or WHY
Try: 'According to [principle], [mechanism explanation]. This means that...
Check: Did you actually explain the science? Or just restate the data?
Sentence Starters
This supports my claim because the principle of ___ explains ___.
The scientific mechanism behind this is ___.
Therefore, when ___, ___ because ___.
Target: about 40 words
5 Write Your Complete CER Paragraph
Write your complete CER paragraph (5-8 sentences).

Use your claim, evidence, and reasoning from the previous steps.
Improve them as you write — make your paragraph clear, precise, and well-connected.

Checklist before submitting:
- [ ] Claim: one precise sentence answering the investigation question
- [ ] Evidence: 2+ specific data points with numbers
- [ ] Reasoning: named scientific principle + mechanism explanation
- [ ] Flow: transitions connect the three parts
Now assemble everything into one polished paragraph.

Your scaffold boxes show what you've written. Use those as your starting point — improve and connect them into flowing prose with transitions like "Furthermore," "This demonstrates," "According to..."
Scoring Guidance — Step 5
Role: complete CER paragraph
Target: ~100 words
Look for:
  • Start with your claim sentence
  • Add your evidence: 'For example, the data shows that...'
  • Transition to reasoning: 'This demonstrates [principle]...'
  • End by connecting the reasoning back to your claim
Data Reference (Turbidity After Filtration (NTU)) Activated charcoal: 8Fine sand: 22Cotton fiber: 35Gravel: 98Clay pellets: 61Unfiltered (control): 150
Start with your claim sentence
Add your evidence: 'For example, the data shows that...
Transition to reasoning: 'This demonstrates [principle]...
End by connecting the reasoning back to your claim
Claim + Evidence + Reasoning = Complete Paragraph
Sentence Starters
My claim is ___. The evidence is ___. This supports my claim because ___.
Based on the data, ___, which shows ___. This makes sense because ___.
Target: about 100 words
Self-Check Rubric
Criteria ●●●●●
5 — Advanced
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4 — Proficient
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3 — Developing
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2 — Emerging
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1 — Beginning
Claim Clear, specific claim that directly answers the question Clear claim that answers the question Claim present but vague or partially answers question Claim unclear or off-topic No claim or unrelated
Evidence Multiple specific data points cited accurately Specific data cited accurately Some data referenced but vague Little or no data cited No evidence from data
Reasoning Explains WHY data supports claim using science concepts Explains connection between evidence and claim Some explanation but gaps in logic Weak or missing explanation No reasoning

Before You Turn In

I completed the planning step
I wrote my claim
My claim is about 20 words
I wrote my evidence
My evidence is about 40 words
I wrote my reasoning
My reasoning is about 40 words
I wrote my complete CER paragraph
My complete CER paragraph is about 100 words
I re-read my writing and fixed any spelling or grammar mistakes
I am proud of this work

Reflection

What was the hardest part of this assignment? What would you do differently next time?

For the Teacher

Teacher Guide — Natural Materials and Water Filtration

NGSS SEP4, SEP6, SEP7; CCSS.WHST.6-8.1, WHST.6-8.2 · Grade 7
Scoring Rubric
LevelWhat it looks like
5 — Advanced Student demonstrates strong scientific reasoning. Reasoning explains the mechanism clearly, cites named scientific principle, distinguishes data from background, and assembles a coherent, precise CER paragraph.
4 — Proficient Student demonstrates solid CER understanding. Claim is precise, evidence is quantitative, reasoning names a scientific principle and explains the mechanism.
3 — Developing Student demonstrates basic competency. Core CER elements are present. Reasoning shows causal thinking. Meets grade-level expectations.
2 — Emerging Student attempts the task but with significant gaps. CER elements may be present but are unclear, disconnected, or scientifically inaccurate.
1 — Beginning Student shows minimal understanding. Response is off-topic, incomplete, or shows no engagement with the scientific content.
Step-by-Step Coaching Notes
Step 1 — Examine the Evidence
  • Independent variable = what was changed. Dependent variable = what was measured.
  • Look for a pattern: as X increases, does Y increase or decrease?
  • Note specific values: the highest, the lowest, the difference
Step 2 — Write Your Claim
Role: claim · Target: ~20 words
  • Name both variables: what was changed AND what was measured
  • State the direction: as X increases, Y increases/decreases
  • Avoid vague language: 'affected it' → name the specific effect
Step 3 — Cite Your Evidence
Role: evidence · Target: ~40 words
  • Use at least 2 specific numbers from the data table
  • Compare values: '...compared to...' or 'while...' or 'In contrast...'
  • Include units (cm, °C, mg/L, etc.)
  • Don't cite background facts here — save those for reasoning
Step 4 — Write Your Reasoning
Role: reasoning · Target: ~40 words
  • Name the scientific principle: '...demonstrates [concept]...'
  • Explain the mechanism: not just WHAT but HOW or WHY
  • Try: 'According to [principle], [mechanism explanation]. This means that...'
  • Check: Did you actually explain the science? Or just restate the data?
Step 5 — Write Your Complete CER Paragraph
Role: complete CER paragraph · Target: ~100 words
  • Start with your claim sentence
  • Add your evidence: 'For example, the data shows that...'
  • Transition to reasoning: 'This demonstrates [principle]...'
  • End by connecting the reasoning back to your claim
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